Remember when there was no stress
Remember when there was no work
Remember when it was all fun
Slowly it started to turn
Now all it is, is work hard in school
Now all it is, is give it your all in sports
Now all it is, is work as soon as you get home
Soon you start to loose hope
But what you have to remember is, the hard work in school pays off
But what you have to remember is, trying hard in sports is good for you
But what you have to remember is, working at home creates great habits for when you're older
When you have these problems you have to remember that there’s always a future
It starts off negative and gets positive, I like the repetition too.
ReplyDeleteI like how it starts off with repetition but the ending line breaks it up. I also like the ending line of the entire poem a lot, very positive.
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