“Conscious Triolet”
I thought I made a conscious decision
But now it doesn’t seem very conscious at all
Doing something in a new way provides the heart with a new incision
I thought I made a conscious decision
This fireball of an idea affects us all
It seems so new, so thoughtful and I guess
I thought I made a conscious decision
But now it doesn’t seem very conscious at all
“Happiness Triolet”
Happiness comes in a different way
Born out of sadness
It rises from nothing like a lotus in water where it lay
Happiness comes in a different way
It can’t be born out of itself
It fights its way to the top, one climbing idea
Happiness comes in a different way
Born out of sadness
I really like this type of poem and how there is repetition. I enjoyed the two topics you picked and the rhyming is very good.
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