I am from the place where the sun shines brightly
And the snow falls heavily
The warmth from the sun beams on the glistening snow
And the sounds of children playing in the snow near the borough
The smell of hot chocolate awaiting a cold breath
Where the breeze flies by the trees
And the sight of birds fly around tree to tree
Where I am from the cars almost never drive by
But sometimes screeching to sudden stop a mile high
I am from a place where the fresh air is abundant and the smell of smoke is scarce
Where the sight of clouds and mountains are disperse
And where the sky in the evening is no better universe
Where I am from the people are friendly and never say no
They look to friends and family as a slideshow that never ends
Where I am from the memories are abundant with good times
And life in this place only has good vibes
I think this is a very well put together piece. The imagery is very descriptive. Also the choice in wording was put to good use
ReplyDeleteI could tell that you are from somewhere thats very cold or just snows a lot because of your ability to describe accurately what it was like for you, I also relate to where you said people never said no because I was raised like that also
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