Bunk beds and lots of fans
Everyone in a good mood
At night the ribbits of frogs are heard
Conch shells sound like the ocean
Home away from home
Here I am my happiest
Over the hill is the Atlantic
Under our bikes lay in the sand
Seagulls make us hold onto our food
Everyone at peace
The poem is all positive. You feel like you are sitting at the beach house and just enjoying life. Also I like at the end you separated the E from everything else.
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed reading this because the first thing coming to my mind is summer. I am able to picture everything you wrote and i really liked the way you wrote this.
ReplyDeleteYour imagery is really vivid in this, and I could totally picture what you were describing. The beach is one of my favorite parts of summer and I could really relate to this poem. I feel like you really capture the atmosphere of the shore in the summer.
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